disarray: (n) a state of disorganization or untidiness.
be original,
be inspiring.
no big deal. this is anonymous. yeah, but not forever.
talk about why you chose your name?
well, it's a city & a color.. just like the singer in the band.
TOO BORING. too simple.
that's who you are though, albany: boring and simple,
mediocre.
"easy-going" "steady" "stable" "chillllll"
indecisive and insignificant... and you can't even decide what your favorite color is, can you, albany?
give metaphors.
how your mind is a factory from 1915. or how love and commitment is as terrifying to you as a 6-year-old having to apologize for calling a classmate stupid.
just be honest, albany grey.
I love how this is like internal banter. Real conversations that I think we all had with ourselves when we made this blog. Relatable to so many people! Your words speak to a large audience. Great start!
ReplyDeleteBeginning with a definition----genius
ReplyDeleteRelatable. Like really relatable.
I like your style.
Coming back for more.
I'm excited for your words this year
ReplyDeleteLike the way you write. Its flows.
ReplyDeleteLike the way you write. Its flows.
ReplyDeleteFrom one Albany to another, I'm excited about you already.
ReplyDelete"how your mind is like a factory from 1915. or how love and commitment is as terrifying to you as a 6-year-old having to apologize for calling a classmate stupid."
ReplyDeleteNICE. you are so significant pinky promise.
The way you introduced your pen name, said something interesting about what we'll think, then introduced part of yourself. That was awesome.
ReplyDeleteI love how this is in 3rd person. Makes everyone relate to you more. Love it.
ReplyDeleteyour ending sentence -
ReplyDelete"be honest, albany grey"
oh my my, i love it.
Ugh, can I just steal your brain and put it in my head for the year? This was amazing! :) cant wait to read more. :)
ReplyDeleteThe metaphors at the end. Yes.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the blogs.